So, I've been
there, done that, written it, and know what it takes to move that script to the
next level.
I'm not some
GURU who wrote one good screenplay 20 years
ago.
I'm NOT SOME SCHMUK
who was lucky enough to land one spec sale during the MILLION DOLLAR spec
craze.
I can't boast a pile
of PRODUCED B-Movie SCREENPLAYS that I'm embarrassed to list
off.
But I can say
this...
I'm a
screenwriter.
A working one.
A
seriously passionate one.
The last seven scripts I've
written have either won or placed highly in MAJOR screenwriting
contests, been stamped with
RECOMMENDS from the top industry coverage houses, been optioned for actual CASH
MONEY, have FINANCING in place
or
are currently in PRE-PRODUCTION. And I
am currently reading for one of the top Hollywood coverage
houses.
Hey. I
want to help you become the screenwriter people beg to work with,
okay?
I am relevant, current, market knowledgeable and
accessible to you!
But don't just take it from me. Click on TESTIMONIALS to see what my
colleagues and screenwriting
clients have to say about my coaching!
Look. I've found that there is only one thing screenwriters
ALWAYS NEED.
DAMN GOOD NOTES
By someone who is actually interested in reading their script,
with the intent to help it become the next screenplay
people
CAN'T STOP
TALKING ABOUT. All with a TURNAROUND TIME of 2-5
days , nonetheless (when I'm between assignments).
My motto going into a script, which I picked up from
my manager, whether rewriting one of my own or helping someone else,
is:
" There is no
limit to better. "
My average notes are 6-8 pages long and
address every single morsel of your story...
Your great HOLLYWOOD
screenplay...
Your MILLION DOLLAR script...
Your BABY...
And we all know
that "NOBODY PUTS BABY IN THE CORNER".
So check out
my services below, and make a smart move by putting me to work for you. I
have a MONEY BACK GUARANTEE
if you
are not satisfied with what I have done for
you, so you really have NOTHING TO LOSE.
** Keep in mind that any script I
read, if I feel it truly becomes a RECOMMEND, I will do all I can to get it
in front of my
connections in this business. I have only done
this three times in my career, because my name goes on the line so the script
has to be one of the best things I have ever read...
**
I DON'T OFFER BASIC COVERAGE AS IT
DOESN'T GIVE YOU WHAT
YOU NEED TO REALLY MAKE YOUR SCRIPT THE BEST IT CAN
BE!
DEVELOPMENT NOTES
$120.00 -
first timers get 25% off
The development notes are quite
involved. I go much deeper into the script, reading
it at least
two times to get to the root of everything, and to see exactly what
problems there
may be and how we can fix them. You will get about
six to eight pages of notes, depending
how much work may be involved in
making the script better, with breakdowns in all categories
of your script.
I will also answer any questions and stay on board to help you work out a new
draft.
Development
Notes Sample
QUERY LETTER CREATION
A) $15.00 B) $25.00
This service is two fold. A) As an add on to development notes. B) As
a stand alone
service based on your own synopsis and logline. A strong
query letter can be your most solid tool for
getting your script into the
hands of someone who can actually do something about it, be it a producer,
agent or manager. With thousands of other query letters out there, you
want to have your best words
forward to make whoever reads it
want to request your script.
"PITCHING" SYNOPSIS
CREATION
A)
$15.00 B) $30.00
A "pitching" synopsis that
can capture the tone and essence of your story and grab the reader in one page
is
probably your most important pitching tool. In this day and age, an
exec or agent of any type will ask to
read a one page synopsis before
requesting the script. Taking your entire script and getting it to fit on
a single page is quite a challenge, but it is something I have had quite a
bit of success at. I will work with
you to bang out a top notch synopsis until you
are 100% happy with it! A) As an add on to
development notes. B) As a stand-alone, script read
required.
Pitching
Synopsis Sample
"PAGE ONE" IDEA
DEVELOPMENT
$100.00
If you have a basic idea for a script and
are just not sure where to go with it, I will help you work out that
idea, including the right types of characters to fit the story, plotlines,
act breaks and structure guidelines to
get you ready to go
outline. You keep full rights to the script, as I will merely act as a
coach to get you
going in the right direction.
"FADE IN TO FADE
OUT" SCRIPT COACH!
$400.00
With
this package I will work with you from the get go. It would start with the
above idea development,
right into an outline and I will be here to
read scenes, acts, the entire screenplay AS YOU WRITE
IT, so
you don't get to the end and we find a hole or problem
that sends you back to rewrite 70 pages. I run a
live
workshop
like this and working with feedback as you create the script proves to
be an invaluable tool.
Others charge up and over the thousand dollar mark for a
service like this, but I love this stuff and do
it for fellow writers all the time,
so this is the best that it gets.
To purchase a
service, send me an EMAIL and attach whatever is
pertinent to
that service, or even ask me some questions if you need to
before you decide.
Then click on a paypal tab below and send me a payment for
the service.
I look forward to working with you.